Haiku Koo-Koo: 11/12/13

Resplendent backyard
A glorious fall morning
 My dog makes a shit

2 comments:

  1. I think "takes" would sound better than "makes". "makes" makes you seem like someone who speaks english as a second language...

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  2. I'd originally written "takes" but changed it to correspond to the softer consonants of the previous lines. Maybe it would have been more common to the ear the other way.

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Thoughts?