Haiku Koo-Koo 9/7/10






















Deer tracks here and there

Running all willy-nilly

Confusion parade



2 comments:

  1. Confusion parade... with those two words, you transformed the scene, giving the deer almost human qualities, showing that universal connection we all have. This was a masterful example of what haiku can and should (I think) always do. That is, open my eyes to a new perspective.

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