Haiku Koo-Koo 6/4/10























Please don’t wash away
all my dreams with the hard rain
of reality


I hate fruit stickers
They just get in the way
Of that first big bite

 
I can play guitar
Better than eighty percent
Of all rock drummers


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5 comments:

  1. MarionJune 4, 2010 at 11:10 AM

    Hells bells, no wonder I like you. I've had a thing for drummers since I saw Ringo on Ed Sullivan when I was in the 1st grade. Super haiku!

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  2. BubbaJune 4, 2010 at 12:20 PM

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  3. BubbaJune 4, 2010 at 12:29 PM

    Sorry to say this (especially now), but I'm no drummer. I'm just not coordinated enough, despite having good rhythm.

    But I do play a little guitar. Not good enough to be in a band or anything, just good enough to amuse myself.

    I've even written a few songs, although only one has actual music to go with the lyrics so far.

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  4. Enchanted OakJune 6, 2010 at 10:59 AM

    Your haiku is loads of fun. I especially like the ones about the dreams, the dandelion, the fountain of words that sometimes drips... That last one has made itself known in my world lots of times.

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  5. moondustwriterJune 6, 2010 at 10:44 PM

    love the haiku and the pictures that seem to echo the sentiment

    can't do haiku so thanks
    i'm stuck in free verse

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