Not strictly traditional Haiku
These are all telling, rather than showing, but the first two do their telling cleverly and effectively. The third one, not so much.
Yeah, many of my (so-called) haiku aren't really haiku at all.(My post yesterday was more traditional)One thing I'd really like to learn better are the different forms (instead of just 5-7-5).Thanks for the input, Bill!
"Do or do not. There is no try." ~Yoda :-)
Mister Miyagi said the same thing to Daniel-son in the original "Karate Kid" movie.