Haiku Koo-Koo 6/10/10

I want to be free
I want to be like Buddha
That’s why I am not


Nothing’s everything
And everything is nothing
Do not want to want


Thinking in Haiku
sets a calm pace to follow
Mind, Body and Soul

4 comments:

  1. BillJune 10, 2010 at 12:06 PM

    These are all telling, rather than showing, but the first two do their telling cleverly and effectively. The third one, not so much.

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  2. BubbaJune 10, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    Yeah, many of my (so-called) haiku aren't really haiku at all.

    (My post yesterday was more traditional)

    One thing I'd really like to learn better are the different forms (instead of just 5-7-5).

    Thanks for the input, Bill!

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  3. MarionJune 10, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    "Do or do not. There is no try." ~Yoda :-)

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  4. BubbaJune 10, 2010 at 12:35 PM

    Mister Miyagi said the same thing to Daniel-son in the original "Karate Kid" movie.

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