Haiku Koo-Koo: 1/16/14

Thin grey clouds racing
Across the full moon’s bright face
I call in my dog

1 comment:

  1. That line 3 comes as a plausible surprise. Well done. I don't generally like this many modifiers, but they work here. Just for illustration, the stripped-down version might be

    clouds race
    across the moon
    I call my dog