Not strictly traditional Haiku
You don't absolutely need that las line, do you? Look:winter confusiononce-bare treesbudding anew
But that would be only 12 syllables.(At least I omitted the photograph)
Thoughts?
You don't absolutely need that las line, do you? Look:
ReplyDeletewinter confusion
once-bare trees
budding anew
But that would be only 12 syllables.
Delete(At least I omitted the photograph)