Not strictly traditional Haiku
This really an autumn haiku, love the scene you are painting with this. Lovely picture.a last leafholds tight to the branchfirst snow
You've caught a real moment here. very good.
Your poem goes very well with the picture you posted. I've always liked the Haiku and honestly, not everyone can write them. Nicely done! :)
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This really an autumn haiku, love the scene you are painting with this. Lovely picture.
ReplyDeletea last leaf
holds tight to the branch
first snow
You've caught a real moment here. very good.
ReplyDeleteYour poem goes very well with the picture you posted. I've always liked the Haiku and honestly, not everyone can write them. Nicely done! :)
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