Not strictly traditional Haiku
good one- at first when I saw the line "battle for the lawn" I thought it would be about herbicudes- but nope - much better!
I meant "herbicides"
lol-A very clever haiku... love it!
Yes...battle...good word choice...i.e. blades 'n such...cool
I love this, perfect picture for it too. :-)
Battle of the lawn is an unending reality. Given half a chance the weeds would reign supreme.Great haiku!
Well Done; I love this! In the trenches...tis true!
The battle continues. I'm losing.
Brilliant. Love it. Ticks all the haiku boxes for me.
Thoughts?
good one- at first when I saw the line "battle for the lawn" I thought it would be about herbicudes- but nope - much better!
ReplyDeleteI meant "herbicides"
ReplyDeletelol-A very clever haiku... love it!
ReplyDeleteYes...battle...good word choice...i.e. blades 'n such...cool
ReplyDeleteI love this, perfect picture for it too. :-)
ReplyDeleteBattle of the lawn is an unending reality. Given half a chance the weeds would reign supreme.Great haiku!
ReplyDeleteWell Done; I love this! In the trenches...tis true!
ReplyDeleteThe battle continues. I'm losing.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant. Love it. Ticks all the haiku boxes for me.
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