Haiku Koo-Koo: 7/20/11


You
danced
with the
wind

In one
last
powdery
plume

Falling
in rivers

3 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    Nice poem! Vivid imagery, great line breaks and word choice!

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  2. Brother OllieJuly 21, 2011 at 8:29 AM

    cool effect - nice natural haiku too

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  3. Maude LynnJuly 21, 2011 at 9:29 AM

    This is really lovely, Eric.

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