Not strictly traditional Haiku
Precise and accurate simile. Well written Haiku.
Very pretty and vivid.
I like it.
Lovely stuff.Anna :o]http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com
stunning.Thanks for sharing.
Very attractive string of words and matching picture.
why not a wakeful child or a shy one or curious inquisitive?sleepy children and bright sun a puzzle for me
Oooh, I like this one! Bravo!
Awesome haiku :)
love it,well done. Greetings:Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.Keep up the excellence.Hope to see you linked in and share.BEST!xoxox
I like it ~