Not strictly traditional Haiku
this one isnt altogether clear to me... unseasonable because they should have gone south?
No, the feast they're seeking is unseasonable. If I wasn't adamant about sticking to the 5-7-5 format, the last line would have been "a feast unseasonable".
Thoughts?
this one isnt altogether clear to me... unseasonable because they should have gone south?
ReplyDeleteNo, the feast they're seeking is unseasonable. If I wasn't adamant about sticking to the 5-7-5 format, the last line would have been "a feast unseasonable".
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