Haiku Koo-Koo: 12/5/13

Geese break the thin ice
Long necks stretched, seeking a feast
Unseasonable

2 comments:

  1. this one isnt altogether clear to me... unseasonable because they should have gone south?

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  2. No, the feast they're seeking is unseasonable. If I wasn't adamant about sticking to the 5-7-5 format, the last line would have been "a feast unseasonable".

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