Not strictly traditional Haiku
Clever. I love haiku. When ill one winter I studied and wrote a good bit. Writing one a day was sort of a discipline. For me it became quite difficult because I chose to use a kigo. I was using traditional but today I discovered that the lists are truly expending to accommodate the West. Thank you for coming by my blog.
Thanks for stopping by mine as well, Liz!
like this one. the whole poem feels like "verge"...