Not strictly traditional Haiku
Wow! What a nice haiku ... and that picture awesome. A nicely crafted haiga.
I don't have to tell you this is a long way from haiku, at least as traditionally understood. But, in its nontraditional way, it works – an effort to catch the moment as it passes. The effort is doomed to failure, but that's a moment in itself.
Thoughts?
Wow! What a nice haiku ... and that picture awesome. A nicely crafted haiga.
ReplyDeleteI don't have to tell you this is a long way from haiku, at least as traditionally understood. But, in its nontraditional way, it works – an effort to catch the moment as it passes. The effort is doomed to failure, but that's a moment in itself.
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