Haiku Koo-Koo: 6/28/12




Edison’s
light bulb

Ten thousand tries
didn't work

Finally
one
did

4 comments:

  1. Y'know, this might work even better if you stopped after "work."

    Edison's light bulb
    ten thousand tries
    didn't work

    letting the reader provide that last word.

    haiku
    the ones that don't work
    work

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    1. Thanks for the input, Bill - you continue to inspire my haiku.

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  2. hit the nail on the head, awesome.

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