Not strictly traditional Haiku
Y'know, this might work even better if you stopped after "work."Edison's light bulbten thousand triesdidn't workletting the reader provide that last word.haikuthe ones that don't workwork
Thanks for the input, Bill - you continue to inspire my haiku.
Love it!
hit the nail on the head, awesome.
Thoughts?
Y'know, this might work even better if you stopped after "work."
ReplyDeleteEdison's light bulb
ten thousand tries
didn't work
letting the reader provide that last word.
haiku
the ones that don't work
work
Thanks for the input, Bill - you continue to inspire my haiku.
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeletehit the nail on the head, awesome.
ReplyDelete