Haiku Koo-Koo: 7/28/11




One soldier faces

A sea of green enemies

Battle for the lawn

9 comments:

  1. good one- at first when I saw the line "battle for the lawn" I thought it would be about herbicudes- but nope - much better!

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  2. lol-A very clever haiku... love it!

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  3. Yes...battle...good word choice...i.e. blades 'n such...cool

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  4. I love this, perfect picture for it too. :-)

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  5. Battle of the lawn is an unending reality. Given half a chance the weeds would reign supreme.Great haiku!

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  6. Well Done; I love this! In the trenches...tis true!

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  7. The battle continues. I'm losing.

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  8. Brilliant. Love it. Ticks all the haiku boxes for me.

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