Haiku Koo-Koo: 7/19/11




The
bright
orange
sun

Peeked
from
behind
purple
clouds

Like a
sleepy
child

14 comments:

  1. Precise and accurate simile. Well written Haiku.

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  2. Lovely stuff.

    Anna :o]

    http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com

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  3. stunning.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  4. Very attractive string of words and matching picture.

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  5. why not a wakeful child or a shy one or curious inquisitive?

    sleepy children and bright sun

    a puzzle for me

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  6. love it,

    well done.


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