Haiku Koo-Koo: 2/4/11














Escaping gutters


With relentless disregard


Nature undeterred

4 comments:

  1. Jeez, maybe I am Mother Nature. I have a tendency to escape all boundaries with relentless disregard, completely undeterred. That was gorgeous! Even the cadence of the words felt like dripping water freezing up.

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  2. Yes, you are definitely a force of Nature, if not Nature herself.

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  3. Excellent - three lines...powerful story.

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  4. Great haiku, Eric. We got ice/sleet today, a rare treat here in the deep South. It's beautiful, mainly because I got to stay in my pj's all day and didn't have to get out in it.

    Blessings,
    Marion

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