Haiku Koo-Koo: 1/27/11


Hear the
echo
bounce

Sky

to lake

to tree

to me

A hawk
is calling

4 comments:

  1. This could work this way

    the echo's bounce
    sky to lake to tree
    to me

    The hawk may be a distraction from something already complete in itself.

    I like it anyway, obviously.

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  2. I thought the same thing, Bill, especially since there's a picture involved. But I wanted it to certinly be a hawk.

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  3. That's my favorite. I took it metaphorically and not literally. I am a writer, but definitely not a poet, though I appreciate poetry with the same wonder I have for people who can paint well. This one will stick with me throughout the day, I don't doubt.

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  4. I would have missed seeing the hawk if you wouldn't have mentioned it. I love the reflection of the trees on the lake - like a set of forest twins :)

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