Haiku Koo-Koo 10/27/10







Out of place circle

Leaning black
against a tree

Too tired to go on

5 comments:

  1. JinksyOctober 27, 2010 at 10:01 AM

    But bringing to mind the ever changing Circle Of Life...

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  2. SheilaOctober 27, 2010 at 1:02 PM

    Too "tired"...nice play on words. Like it!

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  3. JessieOctober 27, 2010 at 3:08 PM

    i really liked this.

    "out of place circle" -- environmentalist issue, nice touch

    "leaning BLACK against a tree" -- environmental and clever

    "too tired to go on" -- a nice way to sum it up.

    smiles,

    p.s. -- thanks for stopping by!

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  4. Kathe W.October 30, 2010 at 1:46 AM

    hah! clever clever you

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  5. Other MaryOctober 30, 2010 at 8:26 AM

    You really packed a lot in those 17 syllables - well done!

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