Not strictly traditional Haiku
I wrote this one while watching sparrows snatching dandelion seeds from their tiny closed green purses, before they could open up into puffballs.I thought about how the sparrows were keeping those seeds from landing on the lawn and propagating there, changing destiny as it were.Of course, they're probably local birds and will just as likely crap-out the seeds there anyway. :)
love the title, great one
Beautiful! Image and the haiku..! The rewriting of destiny...
very creative response to the prompt~
one sparrowwrites my destinywith her beakDay 1: Write
I thought this was fantastic, especially that last line.Thanks for a great read
Rewriting Destiny...Wow...I love the feel of nature here :)
Really good haiku.
Lovely Haiku, cannot wait to see the rest you have to offer!
Nicely done!! This is going to be a great month for Haiku writing!! :-)
I read this the other day but got sidetracked before I had a chance to comment. Excellent poem! It's amazing how one small action can change things.